There’s a lot of information on the web about how to write digital copy. But just like how you struck out a bunch before figuring out how to hit on attractive members of the opposite sex, sometimes it’s equally important to learn what not to do. Location3 Media presents…
Top 5 Pitfalls to Avoid in Digital Copywriting
5. Not putting main selling point first
We all know keywords belong at the front of titles and near the top of copy, but sometimes in our craze to optimize and be clever, we bury the main point in the third paragraph. It is common knowledge that web readers have all the attention span and focus of a puppy on speed. If you’re lucky enough to catch attention you won’t hold it long, so put your main selling point or best benefit statement front and center. A funny opener can hook them, but the well-executed pitch converts.
4. Keyword stuffing
Do you like wombats? Wombats are furry and fun. You could have a wombat today! Wombats are part of this balanced breakfast.
Keyword stuffing is a serious crime. Not only does it ruin content for the reader, it can actually hurt SEO efforts. The keys to effective SEO-optimized copy are balance and ingenuity. Intersperse the keywords within tight, relevant, and interesting copy and they will disappear. Use your imagination and free association brainstorming to fit keywords into text in unexpected ways.
3. Lack of editing
The push for constantly updated content makes it harder and harder to spend time editing. While time constraints sometimes mean shooting off a quick and dirty blog post, successful ad copy, articles, and landing pages need to be edited. And edited. And edited again. Tight copy doesn’t necessarily mean short copy, it just means that every word works hard for the money, and slacker words are cut. A solid seven word headline has 100 words cut. Think of editing as a beauty pageant- for every Miss America there are 49 losers with hairspray on their butts.
2. Falling in love with your own voice
I know you think you’re funny. But Pledge doesn’t care if your friends think your status updates are hilarious. They care if women ages 30-50 laugh at your cute copy and buy Pledge. In writing for different clients, it’s important that your voice don’t always sound the same. Each project needs its own tone- your ideas filtered through a well thought-out position that appeals to the target audience.
That said, it is important to develop unique voices to build up followings. People don’t love Oprah because her East Coast diction is perfect; they love her because her voice speaks to them on a deeper level and she gives away cars. Use your one-of-a-kind voice to build a following on your blog and in social media.
1. Focusing on features rather than benefits
This goes way back in the annals of advertising rules, but remains relevant today. The fact that an iPad can display pictures is a feature. Being able to flash your friends a picture of your dog’s butt at any moment on a 9.7 inch high-res screen is a benefit. Wrinkle-resistant fabric is a feature. Being able to wear the same button-down for a three day bender in Vegas and roll straight to the office from a red-eye with a crisp-looking shirt is a benefit. Readers don’t care about what any product does unless you can point out how it will make their life easier, better, prettier, faster, cheaper or less hairy. Never lose focus on the benefits.






